WALT: write a Diamante poem.
Horse
Mane Big
Neigh Ride Gallop
Hair Fast Sleepy Curly
Baa Chase Spring
Woolly Small
Lamb
Do you think my poem is shaped like a diamond?
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WALT: write a Diamante poem.
Horse
Mane Big
Neigh Ride Gallop
Hair Fast Sleepy Curly
Baa Chase Spring
Woolly Small
Lamb
Do you think my poem is shaped like a diamond?
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Hi James what a cool diamond shape poem. Diamonds are one of my favourite shapes. You sure do have a lot of words to describe horses and lambs. Which is you favourite, horse or lamb?
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