Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 3 September 2021
Bigeye the Dojo
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Hi James,
ReplyDeleteBigeye does look. like an orange rocket ship, the shape is very similar, what a good observation. I like you have described what he looks like and included words like "shiny" to give more details. I can see that you have also included his likes and dislikes, this means I can imagine him on the outside and the inside. He reminds me of someone, I wonder who that it?
Mrs Hamilton
Hi James, what a great dojo description. You have described Bigeye very well it makes it easy for me to imagine exactly what he is like. Just like Mrs Hamilton he also reminds me of someone I know that likes to ride his horse, who do you think that is?
ReplyDeleteKia ora James, what a great description of big eye, I agree he does remind me of a rocket. Well done on describing how he looks, his size and what his smile is like. Are there similarities between you and your dojo monster?
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