Friday, 3 September 2021

Bigeye the Dojo

 My Dojo by James



My dojo is called bigeye because he has one big eye.

What does big eye look like?


Bigeye looks like a little orange rocket ship. He has on big eye and no ears. His legs are very short and so are his arms. He has shinny white teeth and a big smile.



Bigeye Likes and Dislikes

Bigeye likes hard working students that do all their school work.
He does not like that he can not go to school.
He likes playing with his friends.
He likes riding his horse. 






3 comments:

  1. Hi James,
    Bigeye does look. like an orange rocket ship, the shape is very similar, what a good observation. I like you have described what he looks like and included words like "shiny" to give more details. I can see that you have also included his likes and dislikes, this means I can imagine him on the outside and the inside. He reminds me of someone, I wonder who that it?
    Mrs Hamilton

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  2. Hi James, what a great dojo description. You have described Bigeye very well it makes it easy for me to imagine exactly what he is like. Just like Mrs Hamilton he also reminds me of someone I know that likes to ride his horse, who do you think that is?

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  3. Kia ora James, what a great description of big eye, I agree he does remind me of a rocket. Well done on describing how he looks, his size and what his smile is like. Are there similarities between you and your dojo monster?

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