Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 24 August 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi James, you have written a great description of angry. I love all the simile's you have used. It looks like you have been working hard on your learning from home. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora James, well done with your work. You have worked hard and included some similes. Your next step is to share in your blog what you were learning to do e.g. We are learning to describe a character.
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