Dear Journal
Today Riley is feeling lonely. She is lonely because her friends are not home. Her friends are busy doing the shopping without her. She is missing them alot. She does not like being home all by herself. She feels alone and she is lonely.
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Hi James, I love your character journal. Do you like the movie "Inside Out", it is one of my favourites. My favourite character is Sadness. Whats yours?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora James, you have come up with a lot of ideas as to why Riley might be lonely. Don't forget that when you copy your work over to check it fits within the blog page.
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